Arranged Love - Comments

I know...this story sucks. I never expected it to turn out this way but with all the fan base I felt I had to keep up and it screwed me up. The first two chapters are the ONLY ones I think are my REAL work the others are kind of crap. If you want to see a REAL example of some of my work look at A Virgin's Eyes Tainted by Lust or The Angel and the Prince (Another BETTER arranged love story) PLEASE....I'll try to edit and delete on this one later, when I really edit it...but I don't have a computer now I'm at the library...:(

uhhh... ok. I just finished reading all the chapters you have posted, and I have something to say.

This story seems to be all about physical attraction. There's no real story line right now. You never just have them talking or... i don't know, being normal. It's all flirting and sex talk. It would be better if you actually added in some conflict or something. Maybe... I'm just not a fan of all the kissing and stuff.

Know that I mean absolutely NO disrespect or anything, and I know you probably don't care what I think, but I just thought i'd put that out there. So... yeah.

_TECH_

I love this so far! Post more soon; i'm subscribing! And maybe check out MY arranged marriage story? It's not as good as yours... it's my first NON sci-fi book, but I try.

I think this is so cute!!!! Keep writing :)

Ok then...but yes I did update and I took away the creeper chapters....

dont pm him!!!
he may very well be a creeper!!
:P

wooooooooooooooo!!
okaies
sorry i havent commented in a while!!
but i love then new chapters
which was really confuzzling because i couldve sqorn you had more chapters up which had spyness in them
but oh wells
XD
update soon!!

Should I PM him???

Sorry link didn't work...Stalker's message

I'm being stalked....check this out. [url=http://stories.mibba.com/comments/284206/Through-the-Eyes-of-Pleasure/1/Link Name]Stalker's Messages???[/url]

He wrote on my profile too...funky eh? I think I like this kid. <3 Even if he is a little pervert. :P

Thanks for the advice. I wasn't trying to sound snooty in saying I know Seattle...I only lived their a year and a half. I kinda hop around a lot (read my profile...no its not on there) Well I've lived in 8 states. Anyway, thanks for commenting and quoting me. <3 I'll try to update tonight if I have time.

Check out my story!!!! LINKED ABOVE! Lol

also, its closer to neah bay. neah bay is also a good place with a nice native american type of living over there

'its not my fault you didn't know La Push is all the way across the state from Seattle." He muttered and I blushed, tugging my hair and instantly stopping realizing he knew my habit now.

ahaha similar to my words that i told you! :D

Thank you?? Hey check out my new story called The Angel and the Prince

ewww, a muddy beach. that's nasty. but great update. :)

THANK YOU. Leave me a comment and tell me what you think please!!!

I live in Florida so I can't imagine a muddy cold beach hahaha and I'll read your other story right now ^.^

Hey guys I really want your view, did I dissapoint you I know its kinda getting out of control. (I never planned it would go this far) but...please??? Can you at least give me tips to get it on track. I have nothing to work towards except their relationship and that's boring I need a bad guy...something NOT involving spies....hmmm...

P.S- CHECK OUT MY NEW STORY THE PRINCE AND THE ANGEL PLEASE!!!

HOW CAN THIS STORY HAVE OVER 30 COMMENTS? I mean I started this on random thinking it would have zero views and now this...wow...just plain wow....well thank you???

Thank you everyone for your support, Sunshinee, Misscourtney1994, NeverEndingDarkness, Aloha6...and I will keep updating on this mess of a story...but I wanted to inform you of a new Arranged Marriage story I have. I've been working on it since before this one and I think its much more prepared...much more realstic, much more emotional. I like it a lot better and I think you will too if you like the traditional Arranged Marriage stories. Just read one chapter, one chapter and you can tell me how horrible it is or whatever but please, just read it....

Here's the HTML: Its called The Angel and The Prince

http://stories.mibba.com/read/286416/The-Angel-and-The-Prince/

PLEASE READ...