Someone Like That - Comments

So I would like to start with the fact I really liked this story. I didn't see anything wrong with it. I liked how it showed that Sidney was just really a regular guy... who ends with dating a puck bunny. I really liked that you could feel how much Madison liked Sidney. I did think it was cliche in a way, but cliche isn't always a bad thing. Good luck with the contest!

That was a really amazing story. I feel like it didn't really need description of everything around and everything and you really delivered on just the right amount of description. I was a adorable story. I liked your characters! I loved the way you perseved Sidney. He was the funny sweet guy and Maddison was perfect for him. And it's not like most stories were he just comes to a realization of her being good for him, it's like he kinda had it in the back of his mind. I think you have a great chance in the contest and I hope you do. Good luck

Awww sidney!!! I loved this you do awesome stories

Awww sidney!!! I loved this you do awesome stories

Wow this story was great. One of the best entries I've received so far. This had substance and emotion and it was amazing. I love Sidney to begin so that added a nice thing to the story. And I feel you did him great justice. I liked how he'd call her after every game no matter what. I thought that was a really cute touch to it all. Also I liked how you got Maddison's frustration across. I found her to be spunky and cool and just so down to earth. Which was great! I thought Maddison was the perfect match for Sidney. I loved how Katy was pretty much the typical puck slut. I find that Sidney stories tend to have that. So it could've been something like I've read a million times before, but I felt that it was fine because the substance was great. I really really enjoyed it. The ending I loved. The way he described a girl like her was great and I thought it was an awesome ending! :)
Best of luck in the contest!

I loved this!
Good luck with the contest.

This was super cute =)
Good luck w/ the contest!