Right Girl - Comments

Hey gab! I just read it! HAHAHAHAHA
THANK YOU FOR THE SHOUT OUT!
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! REALLY SWEET!
and she slept over! AWWWW, john is such a sweetheart. :)
i hate what happened at the last part of the date though. :(
i feel sorry for her. :(
but she'll be okay i hope.
I sorta miss sammy.

HATERS GONNA HATE TORI!
update soon!

AHHHH! SPECIAL MENTION! :)))) I feel special now HAHAHAHA.
Anyway, the whole date -- minus the Mimi BS -- was really sweet :) I really hate that she gets hate mail though. I mean it's really not Tori's fault that John chose her o'er so many other girls. She should have 'Be jealous, Bitchezzz' stuck on her forehead for all the whores who think they deserve John to see. But I feel like it's only gonna get messier from here and that scares me :|
Another update, please? :)

I wish you'd get more dreams to get inspired !
I SWEAR ON MY SOUL GABY
THAT THIS WAS YOUR BEST CHAPTER!
and it's my favorite!
sammy is such a cute baby!
i love love love this!
it was very sweet and happy. I loved it
BUT THE ENDING OMG! THEY"RE HATING ON HER! :(

THERE'LL WILL BE DRAMA IN THE NEXT CHAPTER< I KNOW IT!!
UPDATE SOON

Ooooh hate mail :))))) I wonder how she'll deal with fans attacking her and her ego. Hopefully it won't be a big deal in their relationship though.
Update soon dear ;)

FINALLY I HAVE CAUGHT UP.
Sorry I've been AWOL for the past few chapters but I hope Nick doesn't end up causing any trouble!
As for John, he is too sweet :)
Saying I love you countless times to Tori and telling her not to say it back coz she's not ready -- now that's what I call cute :)) :>

Update again soon, dear!

OMG I SO DID NOT EXPECT SAMMY!
YOU SHOULD LOOK FOR A PICTURE OF HER! :))
anyway. I loved this chapter, I can feel the drama building up and ready for the next chapter.
How's Tori gonna take care of the baby wit her job?
I bet John's gonna help!
OMG I SOOO CANT WAAAIT!
I LOVE THIS MORE BECAUSE OF THE BABY. :))

update soon!
love you!

I liked this chapter Gab.
I liked how Tori was thinking of getting a family, it's so cute!
and how simple her day went.
It's so cute how she's so close to John's family. I really love it.
and that part when she talked with her dad. :)
I think she should go back home for a while to visit them. maybe she could go with john. :)
OH AND YOUR CLIFF HANGER PERSON, YOU.
THE LAST PART..
GAH
update soon gabs
I want to know what happens next.

I liked this chapter Gab.
I liked how Tori was thinking of getting a family, it's so cute!
and how simple her day went.
It's so cute how she's so close to John's family. I really love it.
and that part when she talked with her dad. :)
I think she should go back home for a while to visit them. maybe she could go with john. :)
OH AND YOUR CLIFF HANGER PERSON, YOU.
THE LAST PART..
GAH
update soon gabs
I want to know what happens next.

Mind-Blowing:)
Beautiful:)
Awesome:)
Fantastic:)
I've Never read such a story with so many things around it. I love itt! RIGHT GIRL IS AMAZING!
-Joey. PS Can you see my two stories and comment on them, please?:P

Yeah, I think it's a good idea that this chapter showed her relationship with her friends and it's not all John this and John that since they're finally together. I like this chapter. It's short but I like it. :) like a..feel-good chapter. :)) But I wanna see more drama next chapter and I hope Tori stops being soo..what's a word for it..somehow unsure. She should know that John loves her and they're going to be okay.

UPDATE SOON!

Gaby, you shouldn't stop writing this story.
It's a filler though but don't worry about that, it's okay :)
I'm sure in the next chapter, you're gonna think of something full of drama or fun or sweet. :)
don't give up just yet just cause you think one little chapter dint go out so well.
take time and think of something good. :)
I'm here if you need help.

Love you.

HEY GABY!

I'm so sooo srry that I only read your update now. :(
I actually haven't been online much, I've been reading.
And now I finally have the time and I used it wisely, dint I? :))
I loved this chapter, it was so sweet! John is too cute. :">

I can't wait for the next chapter.
I knew it, they would be a really really cute couple. :)
update soon!

miss you.

Yes dear, I need me some drama :))
Sorry I couldnt read it when you posted. I didnt have time but yeah this was awesome haha
I love how your story is the only thing that I'm reading this break :)) u should be flattered HAHAHA

So now, you have to update!

HAHAHA. this chapter is not short and pointless, i meam, they just got together. idk but save the drama for another chapter. let them be happy a little longer. i mean, all your readers havebeen waiting for so long for john and tori to be official so give us what we want. :))

cant wait for next update dear

*chokes on tears*
FINAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLY!!!!
WOOOOOOO
THEY'RE TOGETHER!:)
this is such a sweet chapter. :)
I LOVE IT SO MUCH
gaby, now i seriously cant wait for the next update,
i hope it'll be sweet. :)
can't wait to read the rollercoaster ride which is their relationship. :)

Well...this made me smile :))))))

UPDATE PLEASE! :)

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww:D

OHGAAAAHD
*kneels down and bows before you*
I LOVE YOU
I FEEL SO RELIEVED!
:)) inside im screaming, "FINALLY!"

We stood their kissing outside my house and all I could think about was how right it felt.
-that's my favorite part. :)

can't wait for the next update!

GABY!!! WHY THE EFF WAS IT SOOO SHORT?? it was so cliffhangery. :|
I so wanna kill you right now but I won't since you FINALLY made her tell John how she felt.
Write more, dear! You can't keep us waitif forever...unless you're that evil which im sure youre not, right? :))

You fight like a married couple, you talk like best friends, you flirt like first loves, and protect each other like brother and sister. Obviously you guys are meant to be.

-guessing you got this from Tumblr. :))
but anyway..yeah it does fit. :))
I HATE YOU! making your readers wait til tori and john finally hook up. :(
not everyone is patient you know. :P
PLEEEEEEASE, i'll go down on my knees for them to hook up next chapter. :))

:D
love you