My Story - Comments

That was legit.
I love your writing style, this was very well written.
My favorite part was about the bystanders, and their guilt and what they did.
Amazing job with this.

hey, i loved it so much, can you write more please

I like this story. I cannot wait to read more.

I liked this a lot and I'm definitely interested to see where you go with it. It definitely has the makings of a good story. :) The only suggestion I could give is to maybe pad it out a little more with some detail; describe things a little more, y'know. Its brilliantly written but I think that would help out some. There were a few little grammatical mistakes, nothing major, nothing you wouldn't catch over with a re-read.

I'm subscribing; I'd like to see where this goes.

Thanks :)

This made my day. I have been longing to read something like this, and you my friend have satsfied me. I love how you write!!!

This was brilliant, very well-written. Write more, please

Poop I like this. Write more please!

Wow! that's amazing! i was properly captivated by it <3

Thanks :) Text me when you find it? Like the very second! lol. Hmmm is it really beautiful? Even though it's such a horrible topic.

Oh Jess.. I love how even though so much has happened, you can still elaborate the most beautiful stories. This was. Amazing.

And I'm sorry I haven't talked to you much. \: Phone's dead, no charger. I'll try and find it tonight. And charge my phone up. (: Kinda miss how it was before. When we were as close as sisters..