The Story of Rosalie Hale - Comments

  • Escape. My. Fate

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    Love it. So sick but good story. Update soon.
    July 5th, 2010 at 01:16am
  • The_Love_Lost

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    post another please! :(
    June 27th, 2010 at 02:22am
  • The_Love_Lost

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    hey please post another cahpter im really bord heard!
    June 26th, 2010 at 04:30am
  • kcaszieehh16

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    damn it! ur sick! but they are sick as well!
    June 26th, 2010 at 12:14am
  • The_Love_Lost

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    WHAT IS GANNA HAPPEN NEXT?
    June 25th, 2010 at 10:39pm
  • The_Love_Lost

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    DO U WRITE SOME DEEP STUFF! BUT THAT WAS A LOT TO TAKE IN!
    June 25th, 2010 at 10:35pm
  • The_Love_Lost

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    HEY ARE U SURE THAT BASTARED ROYCE GUY IS GANNA DIE YET OR NO?
    June 25th, 2010 at 10:34pm
  • The_Love_Lost

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    ARE ROSALIE AND EDWARD GANNA HOOK UP?
    June 25th, 2010 at 10:34pm
  • The_Love_Lost

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    DAMN THOSEGUYS ARE SICK!
    June 25th, 2010 at 10:34pm
  • The_Love_Lost

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    Wow! I love this story! post MORE! it's great!
    June 25th, 2010 at 05:28pm
  • mz.krazy96

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    DANG HEY IS THIS WAT REALLY HAPPENED TO HER? I LOVE IT BUT NOT THE RAPE PART!
    June 25th, 2010 at 04:46pm
  • mz.krazy96

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    BECCA FREAKING POST THE CHAPTER...HURRY IM GETTING TIRED. :D
    June 25th, 2010 at 04:45pm
  • mz.krazy96

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    Hey keep writing or i'll take ur journals and finish reading them. LMAO! :D
    June 22nd, 2010 at 03:09am
  • mz.krazy96

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    Dam becka!
    June 22nd, 2010 at 03:08am
  • Nanabugs19

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    Damn tht waz good!!! U better get writin!!! I cant wait to read more!!! I LUV U!!!
    June 19th, 2010 at 02:08am
  • Thelovelostbecka

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    But I do hop u guys let it!!!!!!!!
    June 18th, 2010 at 08:11am
  • Thelovelostbecka

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    Well this story is about Rosalie Hale. She and Alice and Jasper and Emett are ma favorites!
    I'm planning on writing stories about each of them.
    Plus everyone knows Edwards and Carlisle. Hey I cant forget to write about Esme.
    June 18th, 2010 at 08:10am
  • solita

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    Ohhhh!
    I like this!
    -subscribes-
    June 18th, 2010 at 06:21am
  • Nanabugs19

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    Damn!!! Wut sick men!!!
    June 16th, 2010 at 07:22am
  • KBex

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    I really like it, but it does seem to me you're pretty much rewriting what Stephenie Meyer already wrote about Rosalie in the Twilight books - I forget which one.

    However, I do think it's good. I was just a little confused by the bit right at the beginning where you switched from third to first person briefly and then back again. Keep writing though! x
    June 15th, 2010 at 09:57am