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  • Queen of the Clouds

    Queen of the Clouds (4955)

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    i agree, it could be a very good long story if you broke up all of that into a few longer chapters and continued it.
    i enjoyed reading it. it was dark, different and very interesting.
    definitely let me know if you turn it into a longer story!
    July 10th, 2010 at 02:51am
  • xSiLeNtXsCrEaMsX

    xSiLeNtXsCrEaMsX (100)

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    You should turn this into a full story
    June 15th, 2010 at 03:29am
  • kalisweetblood

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    BEAUTIFULLY ABUSIVE!
    June 15th, 2010 at 03:00am
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