You really got a hold on me - Comments

so I like this so far and can't wait to see where this is going and to see what happened to cause her to come running back to California after having running away from it.

I love the update and the story is really good so far! I can't wait to see if Mason is gonna actually talk to her again. Can't wait for an update!

This story sounds like it could be amazing. Are you keeping it going? Update?

Also what was said above by The Walrus was good advice. :)

You aren't allowed to post links to pictures of what a character looks like or is wearing. Character pictures go in the characters tab, and you have to describe outfits in great detail.
There are a couple formatting errors, too, such as multiple lines being broken into individual paragraphs when they could be one paragraph.
Might wanna fix these up before you get reported.