Mercy's All That You Need - Comments

  • JaedeVendetta

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    LOVE this story! I'm also liking the 3rd person view.
    I can't wait to see where you take this story!
    Update soon!
    **subscribes!**
    June 22nd, 2010 at 01:49am
  • Broken Carnage.

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    HEY!
    Ohmygosh.
    Holymotherofpearl!
    I
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    This!
    UPDATE!
    June 21st, 2010 at 07:25pm
  • Sara the Cat

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    I know someone named Mersadies. Not Mercedes like the car but... well, you know. ^.^ Anywho, I like the third-person limited more. I tried going through the chapter and putting all of it into first-person and I just didn't like it as much. *shrug* So... good story. I usually don't like anything about 'soul mates' and the cliche romantic types, but I like this plot so far. Maybe if the character were stronger I could get into it more. Eh. So yeah. More soon! I'll read it. :)
    June 20th, 2010 at 09:36pm
  • justhannah;

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    This is really good. :)
    Yeah, I like reading third POV better, but that's just my opinion. ;]
    Update soon!
    June 18th, 2010 at 07:48am
  • Le Lion

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    I think third person is better. I like this story. It's unique for me :)
    Waiting for the third chapter!
    June 16th, 2010 at 11:58pm
  • MyMonkeySaidSo

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    I'm liking this story. I wanna know what the guys role in all of this is...or if Mercy is a full or half blood. CAN'T STOP I WANT TO KNOW MORE!!!!
    June 16th, 2010 at 06:32am
  • Mykayla!

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    I like third person better. This chapter is good and it makes me want more.
    June 15th, 2010 at 11:57pm
  • alidearest

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    I like this story it's coming out good.Update soon :)
    June 15th, 2010 at 11:31pm
  • Mykayla!

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    I like this. I don't think you should worry about getting reported because some of the other stories like this on here probably got some of their ideas from another story. And if you get reported you can just repost it.
    June 15th, 2010 at 08:51pm
  • My-Life-Be-Like

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    I think the story sounds pretty intresting.
    June 15th, 2010 at 08:45am