I know someone named Mersadies. Not Mercedes like the car but... well, you know. ^.^ Anywho, I like the third-person limited more. I tried going through the chapter and putting all of it into first-person and I just didn't like it as much. *shrug* So... good story. I usually don't like anything about 'soul mates' and the cliche romantic types, but I like this plot so far. Maybe if the character were stronger I could get into it more. Eh. So yeah. More soon! I'll read it. :)
I like this. I don't think you should worry about getting reported because some of the other stories like this on here probably got some of their ideas from another story. And if you get reported you can just repost it.
I can't wait to see where you take this story!
Update soon!
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