Bluebird - Comments

its so different from anything I've read on this site so far.

I love this story so much. It is so great. You wrote the story REALLY well. And did I mention I love it?

Only two?! What's gonna happen? And poor Nancy... she's very brave. ( or stupid, but we'll go with brave)
What's gonna happen? more soon please! <3

It's okay to not be around drunk people.. They're like riotous monkeys... Sh*t flies... >.<

Neat chapter tho...
m o r e s o o n p l e a s e!

I am liking this very much still, and I think I have a few therories as to why he was let out :)

I kinda like the writing style. It's like a mystery that i have to read and think about to understand. It's great. More soon please.

JULIE!!!!!

My mind is blown, so you did a good job!
I am waaaaay to excited for the next chapter, you don't even know!
Like, I wasn't expecting that at all!
Poor Adam!

sort of blown away, sort of predictable:)
did i take the fun out of it now?
it was at least very well written, you managed to stop time, and for me that's the most important thing with reading/writing, that you feel like the text didn't rush it and you had the time to feel the words and their meaning:)
can't wait for the ending, i want to know why it's called bluebird.

@_@....
... ... ... ...

(>mind blown<)

i can't even make a good comment...

eeep. i'm excited.
i need to know what's on the tape!

What's on the tape?? More soon!

You should probably update soon, 'cause I might go bonkers if you don't.
I LOVE this.

I think the chapter lengths work so well with this story. it's great.
Congrats on being able to focus! i know that can be the hardest part. >.<

m o r e s o o p l e a s e

Dear Julie,
....This whole not sending me drafts thing....
It's not cool....
I mean like Really?
I've been FOllowing Adam since day one!
And I'm in love with him(thestory) and you
therefore you must
Hurry up and Update....

Love,
Abbey.
: )

UPPPPPPPPDAAATETEDUIGHVUCJIEKASX.
update? :)

"OOOOHHH CHAAAARRRRLLLEEESSSS!!!!!!"

I come baring two of the latter of your wants. (:

Editing: -- but his heart pounded at the thoughts of being at a new school,

Is thought not thoughts.

Love: I think this is one of the best flashbacks so far. His Aunt sounds very strict but she seems to have her redeeming qualities and you can sort of tell with the minimal information. Charles is a lovely name, I do agree, and he seems almost like the corrupting smoking, drinking teenager... And at first I thought he was going to be in it a lot more until your AN.

This is so intriguing... More soon, please?
I'm really glad i found this.

I love everything! :D............except why does your stories alway's have to involve cigarettes? hahaha. *sigh* I guess some things never change. But that's okay, cause I hope you won't! :)

YO!
This is getting exciting :)