The Biography of a Vampire - Comments

  • RoRo

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    It's awesome! I swear!! <3<3.
    January 23rd, 2012 at 09:37pm
  • RoRo

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    Damn, babe! You did a great job!! <3.
    January 9th, 2012 at 09:37pm
  • Momo1990

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    Please Finish it!!!!! Gah!!!!
    August 26th, 2011 at 02:33am
  • sunshinee7

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    awesome update! can't wait for more
    January 22nd, 2011 at 09:53pm
  • SaveMeSorrow

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    Heyy :)
    I really like your story and that fact that it isn't like most of the other vampire stories around this site that have exactly the same plot...
    I'm glad I finally found a good one.
    December 23rd, 2010 at 10:40pm
  • sunshinee7

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    I'm addicted to your story! Please keep updating.
    December 14th, 2010 at 03:09am
  • OmfgWatsBehindU

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    hi! :)
    your storys brill!
    But i find it confusing at times :/
    You should have 2 characters fall in love
    just a suggestion :)
    Keep writing im addicted :D <3
    December 3rd, 2010 at 05:54pm
  • kim wonshik.

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    Hey again,
    I finally finished reading! :)
    It seems fine. The plot and story line is still great in my own opinion. :D
    There are the few grammatical errors still, but that can easily be changed and is quite minor. :)
    Hope this helps!
    December 1st, 2010 at 10:22am
  • The Samurai Girl

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    Didn't have the time to check on you here and catch up with all the chapters lately...
    Sorry, blame my teachers, but...

    Congrats on getting over four effing hundred readers!! Cheers.
    Keep it up you ;)
    October 19th, 2010 at 07:41pm
  • kim wonshik.

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    Hey, it's me from Quizilla!
    So far, I've only read about five or six chapters, but it's really enticing, intriguing, and makes me want to find out what will happen next! :)
    I see no relevance to Vampire Diaries at all, but I find that it is a bit almost like Twilight in a few areas. For example, Stella and Bella rhyme. However, the name Bella doesn't sound as sophisticated and elegant as Stella to me, and Stella is just not a name that I, personally, don't hear everyday, so kudos on that for using a rare name!
    Also, I find the way that Eric and Stella meet is like how Edward and Bella meet. They both meet in class which is very understandable because she's the new girl (very much like Bella as well), though there are no hostile or awkward feelings between Eric and Stella unlike Edward and Bella where he thought he was going to snap her neck in half and she thought he was weird for staring at her.
    Charlie and Renee are divorced just as her parents are, but for different reasons.
    The plot is very different from Twilight though, so I applaud you for that!
    It's an incredible story so far and I can't wait to read more after I finish my homework! lol

    Also, I noticed, just as Thief of Ardor did, a few grammatical errors.

    I hope my comment has helped you a bit. :)
    September 21st, 2010 at 01:56am
  • ditzy69

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    more updates soon.....................please ( :
    September 12th, 2010 at 09:24pm
  • ditzy69

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    eeepp I love this story ^__^
    update please
    September 2nd, 2010 at 07:40pm
  • The Samurai Girl

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    Yes, you can damn well blame me for anything related to Hammond! *-*
    In fact, I'm changing my avatr because of this :P

    And, haha, Alex could never restrain his habits. Too much to ask.
    Stil, who the hell attacked Stella?
    August 29th, 2010 at 06:03pm
  • Plan To Live FoREVer

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    Wow...love the story......very addictive!!!!!
    August 25th, 2010 at 09:23pm
  • The Samurai Girl

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    I loved it!! Especially the last chapter you posted now. :X:X:X
    Alex is funny. I think I am totally in love with him *stupid squeal*

    Please, more drama? :)
    July 6th, 2010 at 12:14am
  • The Samurai Girl

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    Neat, very neat.
    Keep it up! :)

    As a sidenote...WTH's a leviathan? :-/
    June 27th, 2010 at 12:36am
  • Raison D'etre

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    For English not being your first language, you're pretty good! (:
    Liked the update, but it was so short! D:
    Wonder what he meant by silly girl.
    June 22nd, 2010 at 03:43am
  • The Samurai Girl

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    ^that was me being stupid, sorry.
    Should've made sure I wasn't on your account anymo'.

    So: Post more! :)
    June 21st, 2010 at 10:40pm
  • MousyCh

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    Post more!! *o*
    June 21st, 2010 at 01:23am
  • MousyCh

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    i know:(
    english is not my first language unfortunately
    i'll rewrite it correctly...
    June 19th, 2010 at 08:39am