The Biography of a Vampire - Comments

Veeery interesting, I'm curious. C:

I'd reread through EVERYTHING if I were you. There are a lot of grammatical errors and a few spelling errors.

Ok let's start the review for this chapter...

Firstly, I love the sound of your story. Plot is very captivating.
Nate seems like a guy that I would really want to hit on.
Eric...just, yum.

I know it's gonna get even better, so keep up the great job!