WaitingForSnowe - Comments

it's mine ! jeebusss

We all hate vistors! They visit too much! XD

Me no likey the layout! I liked te old one

It's cute.
The beginning was great, poetic. Not going to lie, your grammar could use a little bit of work and you could ease your charcter's description into the story better, but I like it still. Can't say too much because it's only the first chapter, but I am subscribing for sure.

i love this a lot :D i love how it started out in poem form and subtly made it's way into regular writing. i'm excited to read more! :) *subs*

Haha again with the mascara and chapstick? lmao just like scar lol. I love it how Snowe sticks pur food in her backpack

Ahhhh! I love it. and the charcters. Dear lord bereniss I have to help you fix this so mibba doesnt yell at you.

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