July 10th, 2010 at 10:09pm
Beauty - Comments
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I don't think anyone commented on the sheer perfection of your language use. Most people couldn't pull it off, but you did amazingly. Never once did you slip up, and made me realize that you don't usually speak like that. The descriptions were breath-taking, my favorite had to be in the beginning. All in all, this is beautiful.July 9th, 2010 at 09:29pm
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I liked this a lot. You put a lot of good work into your descriptions and your characters. Even though this was short, I was really pulled into the story of it. It was a really good job on your part.June 27th, 2010 at 11:11pm
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Extremely well done. The descriptions for this were insane. I felt like I was there as I read on. It almost seemed poetic in a sense like what you'd read from Shakes Spear but more of modern time. Loved it. :)June 24th, 2010 at 10:19pm
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A really nice story. Many details to draw a reader in.
Thank you for your advice. ~AllieJune 20th, 2010 at 03:01am -
Wow, you've got his character so down in my head,
You portrayed him perfectly.
Your description, as always was immense!
<3June 16th, 2010 at 09:11pm -
daily ravishment...XD
I love it.June 15th, 2010 at 11:10pm -
Well. I loved that. :D
Dorian was portrayed really well and I thought I sounded like something from that time, a sort of poetic feel to my speech.
I love the descriptions, I really don't know how you do it but you paint your world perfectly for the reader to see.
In all honesty...you're amazing.June 15th, 2010 at 11:07pm -
This is a really sweet one-shot.
It had me smiling at the end. You write so well! <3
I would love to read more of this 'series', you obviously know what you're doing and you write it soo well.
Excellent job.June 15th, 2010 at 11:02pm
Wonderful job! :] <3