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Hehe!! I love it!! This movie is so funny. :)

Psh, you did a great job showing the strength of Pilot & Jack's relationship, just like in Highway. It was such a good movie & the fact that you have a fanfic about this movie too makes me really happy because they're so hard to find. The language was simple, but it worked very well to show off how close Jack & Pilot really are. The part with the pop quiz was my favorite & I remember how my friend Jenny & I used to say "Gold star for you" all the time because of this movie. You incorporated details very smoothly & flawlessly, which I find amazing & typical of quality work. Again, great job! You've done Jake Gyllenhaal & Jared Leto well!

I haven't seen this movie, but now I want to =)
This is very well-written, I think you portrayed their friendship perfectly.
And as everyone's said above me, the "god of fuck" is epic.

This was my favorite line: Together they could rule the world because together they were invincible.

I can't wait to read more of these Jake oneshots!

Maybe it's just me, but the whole two-souls-in-one-body thing reminds me of The Trust. The term "God of fuck" made me lol x]
Lovely job~!

Okay, so I loved it. The term "god of fuck" made me giggle :3 I think you did a great job with their relationship.

It was like telling Jack to keep it in his pants, it just wouldn't happen because he was the god of fuck;

Haa. That made me giggle. (:
-Ehmm-

This was very well written. Descriptive. I loved the detail.
Well done.(:

I felt like I was there. And that is what I look for when reading. You're a very talented writer, plus Jake G. and Jared L. are just waaaay hot. (; thank you for having me look at this - it's wonderful. <3

Love the first paragraph. The details were so clear.
This was great. (:

I loved this :3

You did amazingly on the writing and I love the layout.

You showed the strength of their relationship very well.

Nice layout<3

As for the writing, this is probably my favourite of all of your stuff. I started reading and suddenly I was at the end. The picture was perfectly clear in my mind.

Awesome :D

"Together they could rule the world because together they were invincible."
-Beautiful.

Story Review Game.

I have been dying to see this movie.
I'm going to by and watch it because it looks awesome and of course it has Jared Leto and Jake Gyllenhaal, what more could you need?

Okay on with the actual review.

Title, Layout, Summary:

Simple title, clean layout with a cute picture, and a quote by a awesome philosopher, excellent!

The first paragraph is amazing. I love the description in the first line. Great word choice as well. I can picture this happening in my head.

if he'd kept it in his pants then Pilot would have been at home in peace - This line made me laugh.

he was the god of fuck; that's what he was known for] - well that's a pleasant thing to be known for, lol.

Aw, they have friendship rings! That's so cute, I love it!

"Beep. Perfect score. Gold star," he laughed, pushing his forefinger against Pilot's forehead like they had done since they were kids. - I think this line was the one that truly conveyed the friendship the two boys have. And since I see that's what you wanted to do, I can tell you that you managed to pull it off perfectly.

Your story makes me want to see the movie even more.
I really enjoyed reading this, it was simple, but very sweet at the same time.
Great job!

I loves it