Elina - Comments

I really like where this has gone since I commented :D I feel terrible that I didn't comment on anything else 'cause, well, I've already read and commented everything by you, haha x] Anyhoo, can't wait for the next update! <3

This story is so good! I like your writing style and the way you described the surroundings. I can't wait for the next chapter. You just got yourself another subscriber. (:

This has got to be the best, most well-written arranged marraige story I have read yet.
It's gorgeous, not too descriptive, but still very mature and believable. I love it. <3

I'm not too fond of arranged marriages and the layout was a bit dull, but this was amazing. It was interesting enough to keep my attention through the whole thing. I can't wait to read more of this.

Okay, so as soon as I saw it was an arranged marriage story, I was kind of waiting for it to be horrible.
Thankfully, that was not so.
As cliched as the subject is, your writing makes it not just bearable, but very interesting and nice to read.
Wonderful.

I love it and I have subscribed.

This is really cute (: When I see these arranged marriages story, it's usually with celebs or the girl is a princess. This was a really fresh and lovely idea. Great job <3

really good chapter! i like how it was in Luka's P.O.V and usually, for arranged marriage stories, they usually have the characters similar to one another, because the author doesn't know how to write two different personalities, and you are one of the few who actually know how to! i love this story and please update soon!

Prepare for a long comment.
Chap 1: OKay, Im not fond of arranged marriage stories but this one is pretty good. I've got the weirdest feeling he followed her into the woods.
Chap 2: In thie beginning I had a hard time deciphering if the book was in Luka's point of view or Elina's. Luka sounds like hes the more shy character apposed to Elina and I like that. A majority of books always depict the girl as shy but I like it this way.
Chap 3: I knew he followed her! The only thing I dont like about this is the authors notes...You keep downing your work even though its really good. Keep your head up! Its great! Keep up the good work too.*subscibes*

I think the words flow very smoothly. The beginning seems a bit sudden, but that's okay.

I agree with Gyllenhaal as cliched the subject it comes off fresh & new. Great start.

This isn't too bad. It's actually pretty interesting.
But I think you should make your own layout, because this one is kinda dull.

i like you story so far!!!! it would be cool if you could post the character though! i like to see what the characters look like in the authors perspective!