The Things We Learn in Art Class - Comments

I love this story...this is probably the second or 3rd time I have read through it since i havent been on mibba in a long time, but I agree with someone else who said that the POV'S are all mixed in each ch. instead of being like one in Devin's POV and then the next in Ayden's POV....but I kind of understand why you did it like tht as well...but it can get confusing as to who is talking sometimes.....otherwise an amazing story that I don't want to end :(

comment swap bought me here and though i haven't read it all i do in fact like what i have read so far. the characters are both so sweet when they interact with each other. the only real negative i have iis that you change pov often...maybe too often i dont know sometimes its just a little hard to keep up :)

Comment swap brought me here;; I have yet to read all of it, but I like it so far. Really good details, which is good. The summary didn't really pull me in, but I thought 'aw, what the hell.' So, I read it anyways and I'm glad I did. Good work! :)

Very cliche beginning. I didn't fully understand the concept of the story from the summary, besides that the two characters are both in some form of art classes. I haven't read the whole story, just the first chapter, but I may come back to it in the future.
Also, the red in the layout is a bit too bright for me, considering the rest of the layout is lighter shades of gray.

i cant wait to read the wrap it up chapter
this story was amazing and very sad
good job:)

i cant wait to read the wrap it up chapter
this story was amazing and very sad
good job:)

I like the layout change x3
And I think that it should be one long epilogue, instead of cutting it in half.
It would be easier to read, well, that's what I think.
Another well written chapter <3

holy unexpected! brandon was a douche, but wow! can't wait to see what you guys make of this, should be EXTREMELY exciting.(:

I definitely didn't see THAT exact event happening.
But nevertheless, this was an amazing chapter. <3
Update soon as you can, I cannot wait to find out more. (:

So worth the wait<3

Loved it!
something really does need to be done about Brandon

sooooooooooo this needs to be updated. please?????

i love this!!! its really really good!
UPLOAD SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SHIT IS ABOUT TO GO DOWN.

Love. It. Keep writing!!!

Love. It. Keep writing!!!

totally amazing
it just keeps getting better and better

I have a serious dislike for Brandon right now.
I want him dead as much as Devin does !
Ohh, and he better not harm Ayden or Devin.
Update soon? </3

updates would be appreciated XD
can't wait to see what's coming up next!!!

Waiting impatienly for more. I love this story.