My Life in the Greek Clouds - Comments

Please finish :/

Wait, what!?" I think to myself. I knew it. I can't do this. This is humiliating. I knew being with him yesterday would change stuff. I kept him there as a diversion. I feel bad that I used him, but I needed him there. Poor thing. I don't know what I would possible say to make him understand that last night wasn't what he thought it was.

Why can't Hermes just take the fact that I'm simply not into him? Gosh.---rofl she forgot hades

I really like this story! And even though Mr. Malicious Malfoy is one of my faves, I want you to keep writing about this one too! Except I'm a bit confused .. did she forgot about her 4 AM encounter?

looooooooooooooove it !!!!!!!!! please keep writing more :)

More? D:

I really enjoy your take on the Gods and everything.
Very creative!
This story is pretty cute :)

oh thank youuu! :D i agree. it's a fan fic, but not. lol. i love it.

AHAHA this is such a cute idea!!

I think I died laughing at the "oh shit mother skittles" part. XD
And for mentioning the Amanda Show! omg
I miss that show.

All that aside, I loved the update.
:>
And they kiiiiissed.
Twice!
That makes me a happy camper. :D

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This story is really good i love how you made their personalities and for ideas.......well maybe like XSpiritRavenX said make hermes start to notice things, and maybe make the romance between her and hades start to really take off ya know. maybe those are just ideas but please dont stop writting.

I think it's really good =) I love how you incorporated myths into a regular teenagers life. It's awesome! Anyway, if you wanted for the next chapter you could have Hermes start to notice how she looks at Hades and stuff? I'm not really sure xD

yeah basically. it's intense right?
i'm trying to keep it a little on the myth side,
but up to my imagination as well. can't wait for the next chapter,
I don't even know what i'm going to write about next.
hehe. :)

any ideas?

I love the way you compare things.
Frigin Steve from Blue's Clues..
Omg.
Scooby.<3
And they shoulda kissed.
Whaaaat?
So Zeus arranged for them to get married pretty much?
XD
Oh, and just be careful with "your" and "you're."
Like:
"Yes, I guess your right." He sighs,
It's be, "Yes, I guess you're right." He sighs."
Hope that helps. U:
And you bet your ass I'm yo' numba 1 fan, H0M13. ;D

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Gdi, Julia.
"I think I just threw up in my mouth a little."
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YOU MAKE ME LAUGH SO MUCH DURING THIS STORY.
GDI.
And wtf
Hermes and elves..
Oh man.
HE SHOULD GET A PERSONAL ELF!
.. Did he really say "how smashing?"
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-dies-
AND OOOOOOH.
HADES. WHAT A HOT OLD MAN. ;)
Well, I'm assuming so since you don't have a picture up yet. XD

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I love this idea! Has been just what I am looking for :]

Update soon :]

THANK YOU///
FINALLY;; A GREEK GODDESS STORY. i love you for posting this, love!!! (:
it's beautifully written and it's greatttt(:

Omg Julia.
First it's "THIS BITCH NEEDS A GIRLFRIEND."
Then it's "Tickle-Me Elmo."
Then it's frigin, "when we were little people.."
AND THEN ARNOLD AND "I'LL BE BACK."
You make me laugh so much.
Gdi, this story's so entertaining.
:D

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Lmao, "can't keep it in his pants."
Classic.
The way you made Zeus makes me giggle. :>
And "someone buy me a shot gun."
lol, Julia, I love you.
I love her personality, it makes me laugh.
This story's awesome, even though I know nothing about Greek Gods n' such.

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