Sceleton, Skeletos, Skleros. - Comments

The descriptions in this were beautiful, really. You have a unique way with words, and it's really quite inspirational, coupled with the fact that you always tackle such difficult topics with poise and grace. The idea that the person in question had become less of a person and more of a skeleton really struck me. They had just become so obsessed with their weight they were nothing more than bones.

I loved the title (although admittedly, I didn't understand the significance), and the layout picture really fit the story. It almost made me sick to look at those bones, to think that someone might go to such great lengths to look even skinnier than the model in the picture. Fantastic job.

>.< When a person can write an anorexia dribble as well as you can, that's when I have to bow down to them.
I have a question. Have you gone through any sort of eating disorder before?
That would explain how well you've done this.

One thing, skeleton is spelled with a 'k' right? --in the title I mean.

Holy crap. Even though this isn't very many words, I have a vivid picture of my head; that's extremely depressing and sad. You're a great writer! I mean seriously, in less than a paragraph, I've already formed my own story of this. Fantastic job, chap. XD But seriously, great.