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  • Mercy James

    Mercy James (105)

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    not what i expected...but it was still pretty good
    you have a gift with descriptions though, i'll give you that much
    i enjoyed your story very much...though i wasn't to fond of the ending
    it could have been better...but then again it would have taken away form the greatness of the rest of the story
    thank you for entering my contest
    i enjoyed reading your story
    August 3rd, 2010 at 11:09am
  • cthulu sleeps.

    cthulu sleeps. (100)

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    I liked the end.[/insane]

    Loved it! Seriously, the way you wrote it is just....omfg I luv eet. It's was brilliant for an original slash.
    July 11th, 2010 at 05:56am
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