Dying of the Light - Comments

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I really fell in love with this story. Your characters are extremely well developed, and seem to fit with each other seamlessly. Your style of writing was also very cool; great word choice and just general flow. In a weird sort of way, I almost liked the way Molly died. Though I did love her character, I thought it was the perfect amount of emotion and drama to change things up a bit.

You're a wonderful writer. xx

I really loved this story. It was beautiful. The characters were really great and the ending was pretty emotional. I didn't like that Molly died... I know it added a lot of drama but I would've preferred if she had stayed alive and lived on for Asher.
You did a really great job. I don't usually read long stories like this. x]

So I really like your charactrs, they are very realistic which is hard to find in stories lately. The thing I didn't like in the beginning was how you sort of just rewrite the chapter before, just in a different point of view. I dunno, it sort of just bugged me. Anywho, I thought it was nice and its sad to hear your characters die

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This story was just something else. It was cute and happy, but just so sad at the same time. Death makes me weird. (you're super cool if you get the reference there) I absolutely loved this story, and everything about it :D

That was so sad that I cried! I wish that neither one of them died. :-(

I would have commented earlier, but I was reading this in my dad's laptop and he wanted it back. I'm so glad I subscribed. This story was just so good. I usually don't read sad stories, but this one in a very sad way had it's own happy ending. I hope they can be together wherever they are.

That was a great story..

*sob sob* seriously, there's tears in my eyes. this is fantastic....a wonderful ending....just wish there was a chapter of them in heaven T.T

It's so depressing . . . and happy . . . and all tangled up like a spiderweb. There are so many emotions playing through me right now. I'm really glad they get each other and Ben's not getting in the way of anything, but it's so sad the way it has to end . . . :[ But making the reader feel emotions is what the goal is, so you're doing just fine! :]

awww.

Yay! More comments that you deserve! And I cannotttttt believe that that happened, which I shall not say, because there may be people who haven't gotten to that part yet!!! I'm so excited for them!!!!! And Molly is going to get better! And they are both going to be happy!!!!!!!

And I'm also very happy for Ben, too, just like Molly. Absobloomingly awesome story!!!!! :]

I’m only chapter 4, but, I could already tell that I’m getting more and more wrapped up in this story. I love both of their personalities, Molly’s and Asher’s. She’s so stubborn and Asher is so shy and fragile. I really want to know what he has that’s killing him, so of course I’ll keep on reading! Your writing style is the kind that uses these ‘big’ kind of adjectives, but only sparingly. You don’t overdo it, but you know just where to put them. Anyway, I’m glad you made Asher the way he is. He’s really hard not to fall in love with. It really is a great story!

now four! and i love it. its so sad though.
i still love it!
cant wait for the next chapter im lookin forward to it!

Make that three people. Haha
I know this won't end well, but I'm reading anyway.

^Agreed, why are there barely any comments? Its a really great story, and I love the characters.

Why are there no comments? Jeez. This story is totally awesome! The plotline and the characters are great! I really hope that Molly forgives him . . . :[ it's so sad! They both had no clue . . . but now they will, right? Right??? O.O