(I don't understand how this doesn't have any comments yet...) Anyways, this is absolutely beautifully written. You're so amazing at creating these wonderfully vivid descriptions and making characterization without too much dialogue.
I watch him twist his emaciated body around whoever he’s dancing with and kick his head back smiling... This is my favorite part. The way you describe his dancing and the environment they're in is so lyrical; it's almost like a song. It's just...so beautiful. Amazing job.
Anyways, this is absolutely beautifully written. You're so amazing at creating these wonderfully vivid descriptions and making characterization without too much dialogue.
I watch him twist his emaciated body around whoever he’s dancing with and kick his head back smiling... This is my favorite part. The way you describe his dancing and the environment they're in is so lyrical; it's almost like a song. It's just...so beautiful.
Amazing job.