A Tournament to Remember - Comments

  • celestial_royalty

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    Huh. How interesting! I can't remember how long it had been since the Triwizard Tournament took place- my attentions weren't with it when I read teh books. Still, it's fascinating- especially the part with Grindelwald. Dumbledore seemed quite in character, although more like his older self than his younger. That would be quite nice, I think, to add in a bit of desire for fame- all that business with the Hallows and wanting to be Master of Death.
    June 12th, 2012 at 01:02am
  • silk tea.

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    The one thing I'm not a fan of is the layout. It was just bleck. I don't like the repeated image in the background or the huge font.

    But the story itself was very interesting. I love the originality. It's unique from a lot of the other HP fanfictions I"ve read on here. And I love the fact that you kept Dumbledore in character. It such a nice refreshment from all the other people who try to get Dumblydore in character and just completely fail. good job.
    September 2nd, 2010 at 07:26pm
  • Half-Blood Prince.

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    omg. That gave me chills! D:
    It was a great story! :D
    I loved it. :)
    July 11th, 2010 at 10:18pm
  • Geek In The Pink

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    Like all your writing, I loved that, it was really interesting. also, it made a lot of sense... ie the time frame thing. It seriously bugs me when people write stuff that doesn't make sense, i.e. Dumbledore going to school with harrys parents. It must have taken ages to reasearch all that!
    June 17th, 2010 at 07:08pm