I really like the premise of the story, Blaze seems to be a girl that can get along with anyone especially with her diverse interests. She seems relatable. I just get a little bit whiplashed every now and then with her temper. She seems like everything Jonny says sets her off. Like in the first chapter it seemed a bit forced that she would instantly get so offended with Toews asking if she was going to go to all the games. Some guys just say things to strike up a conversation with a girl.
Great updates but I thought they were meeting Duncan and Kelly for dinner at the beginning of that chapter instead of her going to the hotel to talk to Quinn..