Waning Moon - Comments

hm, nice ending. very peaceful ^.^

Woo hoo!! :D Good job! :D

Good story keep it up.

she shouldn't have thought of Dora as a friend. . .
pretty cool job! lol
update please! ^.^

dun dun duuuuuuuunnnnn!! I was not expecting that! Awesome update, now please more

also interesting, a bit more than Dark Secret!
lol nice job! ^.^

Awesome update :D more??

Just letting you know
in the beging you forgot to put the other ] at the end so the I isn't bigger.

I really reallt like this story.
I can't wait for another update.
-subscribes-

I like this a lot! Please update :)

I like it! Can't wait to read more. :)

loved it!!!!

I really like this. It's intresting and twilight so ya :D more??

This story is quite good, but I have one question. You said that Nessie stopped aging at seven. Does that mean that she has the body of a seven-year-old? That is my only question.

I could find no mistakes in a three chapters, which is good. This story is very interesting, and I will be looking out for updates!

A very interesting story. Love how you're doing it in Nessie's view. Just amazing doll :)!

Awesome, Update?, By the way, why is your story called Waning Moon, Shouldn't it be Warning Moon?

By the way, im not being mean, im just asking.

Like it :)