usually when i read a story no matter how sad i never cry but this story had so much emotion heartbreak and pain that i couldnt help but cry the entire time i was reading it
i read alot and this is the second story that has made me cry
This is so sad. I almost cried. You're pretty good at writing. It would be better if it was longer, but I guess that's actually part of what makes it sad. It just somehow reinforces the feeling that Gerard is just leaving Frank so abruptly even though they both knew about it for at least a year or however long. I liked your story a lot. You're good at describing Franks feelings. If there's more I will totally read it.
June 18th, 2010 at 02:00am
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but this story had so much emotion
heartbreak and pain
that i couldnt help but cry the entire time i was reading it
i read alot
and this is the second story that has made me cry
u are a truely amazing writer