June 15th, 2011 at 10:07am
First off I LOVE the layout! It's simple and easy to read. :)
Secondly, I just love the easy flow it has to eat.
Every sentence follows each other perfectly.
The writing itself is amazing. I love the way you write. I feel as if I'm right there watching it happen as I read.
My only tiff is that you have a few errors, one being, “You'll don't fine."
I think you meant to say, “You'll do fine.” (;
Other than that, I loved it. <3
And I'm sorry it took so to judge your story; I was waiting until it was closer to the deadline. x)
Snape is my favourite character and it's so sad cos I know he screwed all that up but for a while he was happy =[ (ugh crying again now)
Anyway, beautifully written! It flowed really nicely and then ended so serenely!
I'm really enjoying your writing =]