Only When the Wind Paints Me Black - Comments

ohno. the thread's been inactive for over 3O days because i'm a poop.

but it's okay. i updated.8D;;

Because it's not.;D

When explained, it didn't sound as frightening as it really was.

Oooh, I hate that. :grr: When you have a dream that's really upsetting or frightening but it sounds completely stupid. Then when somebody asks, "What's wrong?" and you tell them, they laugh at you. But it's not funny to you! Dreams have their own fucked-up logic and it can be dream-scary and real-world-stupid at the same time.

Sitting in nothing but his navy blue briefs and sweating all over, Frank probably looked like something out of an illegal porno.

Oh, the wicked, wicked thoughts that line puts into my head. *sigh* ;;P :yah

Frank decided it was be a good idea to take a walk at 4 in the morning around the block.

Why am I thinking that's not such a good idea? :roll:

With a sigh, Frank sank down and sat on his bedsheet again. Of course you don't want what I have, he though. I've got a nasty case of love syndrome. He laid down, his knees pulled u to his chest, and mentally kicked himself for making such a bad joke before falling asleep.

Don't be a wuss, Frankie. Go after him!!

ok i had to edit my post bc it contained concrit and i'm not so sure it was con so much as crit. 8)

i have not read any of this yet, but i can tell by the first three lines i am going to loves this. so i subscribe. i look forward to spending the night enjoying this. as soon as i can get off of the phone with my bff.

haha I liked this. :]

Not washing the back of his head is about the cutest thing ever. I'm still confused by their "relationship," though.

Aw, so cute.

Awwww.
Lover it!!!!!!!
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More soon?

Eeep. >.<
My mum made me go on a surprise trip, so I couldn't read or nuffink.
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Twas gewd.
Morewhen you can NOW.

i like thisss, its really creative. =]

What happened to the japan-ish thing.
This is almost like a new story.
lol.

update soon.
(:

Ahah. I LOVE the horror-style spin it has.
Tis what makes it unique.
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More when you can, hon.

I don't know what you had intended, but I'd be surprised if it was better than this. It's fascinating and original.

I fucking love this.
<3

Oooooooh.
Freakydeaky. XD
Love love love lurvie it, hon.
It's just soooo.....odd.....I love it. ^___________________________________^
More soon?

Ouu,
update again!
I love this,
it's so different.
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Oooh I like it.

Could you make your font larger? I can hardly read it.
Damn me and my crappy eyesight.

Meow? XD Niiiiice. Sounds like something I'd do, except I'd probably 'moo' in its place.
Loved the start, hon. ^______________^
*subscribes*
More when you can.