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  • carousels;

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    That was so . . . AMAZING! You did a fabulous job of being creative with the prompt! You did a fabulous job with grammer and spelling. You also didn't break any rules! So good job and good luck! =)
    June 21st, 2010 at 04:32am
  • the time lady.

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    This was amazing.
    (I somehow just managed to spell 'amazing' as 'adsalkdam'. I don't even know :/)
    Anyways.

    Somehow, you really brought emotion into this. I wasn't just reading it, it was like I was running with them. Good job, you're a very talented writer.
    June 20th, 2010 at 03:55am
  • Ghastghost24

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    That was amazing wow i loved it so much i wanted more great job.
    June 19th, 2010 at 12:17am
  • ayla.nightmare-

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    oh my fuck! I LOVE IT! holy shit, I'm freaking blown away! this is amazing! I love how you basiaclly put the lyrics into story mode; it's just freaking amazing!
    June 18th, 2010 at 07:52am
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