I Love A Wolf - Comments

WaterWisp (100)

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Naw... that one was a bit short...
But ah... do you think you could add a little more description? The ghostly blob was a little confusing... and the crashing noises in the previous chapter definitely need to be explained... but other wise...
NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!

August 3rd, 2010 at 09:58am

WaterWisp (100)

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YOU DID IT AGAIN!!!
Ha Ha.. xD
Love the ending again =D

July 12th, 2010 at 03:51am

WaterWisp (100)

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Nice!! love the tads bit of humor at the end of chapter 2 there xD

June 29th, 2010 at 02:26pm

GemalemPixie (100)

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This is really good hun dont give up on it :)
but maybe make it a little easier to read lol the background kinda gets in the way xD

June 29th, 2010 at 12:24am