If I Lay Here - Comments

i just wanna cry, this is so good, i can't wait for onother chapter

i love this story! please continue writing it!

So i just finished reading another one of your amazing stories, even though its unfinished and only 6 chapters, its still awesome. I can already sense the drama and connection between nick/sophie! Its so cute how they think of eachother so much now and dont even really stop and realize why :D sooo pleaase updaate very soon i want to see how this story keep develooooooopinnnnng(:

Where has this story been haha :P update whenever possible please!!! I miss it

I miss this story oh so much.
Please update soon :)

Such an amazing story.:) I seriously crave more, like a peice of cake... Haha. But yea, you should totally update as soon as possible! :)

This is so so good (: You're a great writer.
Subscribing (:

i absolutely love this story!!!

I love your stories(: just read this one and lovelovelove it<3!!!! Update soon(:

Heey, I really like this story, it's pretty much my favorite now that TMT ended, I'm waiting for the sequel, though! ;) Haha.
I love it, can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh! Below is the link to my new story, read it if you feel like it :) It has Nick Jonas in it, although he'll be making an appearance in the next chapter haha.

Alright, finally an actual comment(; haha. I am loving this story, the most recent chapter brought me back to the depth of this story, which I love!

I literally love Sophie. Best character ever, yo. Blame Randy Jackson for that, finishing up watching my American Idol catch up from last night(:

Lmao, I’ll talk to you later doll!

I took the time to re-read this story and remembered all of the things that I liked. It's such a deep, dark story line and Nick's character is so complex. I think he is lost. In a way no one can blame him because Sarah was his ither half obviously and when she died a part of him died with her; his only problem is that he pushed the part that remained alive somewhere in the back and that's no way to cope with this kind of situation.

I really do like Isabelle, but Nick is being too good to her and he depends on her more than she depends on him [or so it seems to me in many situations] she is really his safe blanket which is not really a positive thing because she won't be a little girl forever and he will have to let her go and be exposed. I think he's afraid of that.

Sophie is amazing. I like her attitude a lot and she seems intrigued/interested in Nick even if she tries to deny it. There is definitely some sort of chemistry between the two even if none of them are acknowledging it -- it's still there and I can't wait for new chapters to see how it will all develope.

Update soon! : )

- Maya

This is so different, in terms of Nick. I'm not used to reading about him like this in your stories. I mean he didn't even seem this broken in broken danger!
I love how you write in this :)
I was wary at first reading it because I feel like Joe and Nick are gonna fight over Sophie and I hate even reading about them fighting. haha. But maybe Joe will get Jenna instead! haha
I love Sophie's character and Joe's too.
I like how this is more in the future, as in they're all older.
Great job, can't wait for more! :)
.xoMar.

Yay!!! I'm so excited this is being continued!

yea-huh. i've just read it.

i dunno what to say soo, im gonna start with this - this story has something deeper than your other recent stories, i just couldnt put my finger on it..

Sophie. she's really nice. I really, really like her. even just meeting Nick for the third time, she seems to care more and more for him. gaaah! ;)

I feel sorry for Nick. as if that i'm feeling his pain whenever he thinks of Sarah and tears just keep falling from his eyes (dramatic much).
"Joe knew how much Nick had embraced love with Sarah, but it seemed like love was hopeless to his brother now, like he had only one spot and it belonged to Isabelle." -- that's so right. Nick is hurt and hiding from his family and miserable past. He has to face it sometime and accept things, and live again. AND Sophie must be the girl he just needed. A mother for Isabelle and his companion.. (lol.. i'm getting too and too dramatic here.)

Jenna? well, she's a happy and bubbly person. :|

as for the brothers' little argument - i was like 'whoa, Nick is showing some emotion'.
And what Sophie did at the end. she's such a nice person.

UPDATE SOON! pleasee.. it can be any of your stories, they're ALL amazing. ;)

:O wow. you updated, yay! i havent read it yet, just took a peek and i liked it already.haha! call me crazy.that's all...

imma read it later... just have to find my (actually my mother's friend) memory card for her video cam.. i think i'm hopeless. :(

okayokay, enough.
Bye. TAY!

:]

Wow, it's really touchy subject. Feel bad for Nick, but still, Joe should know better to let it be. Sometimes, Nick needs some time to let Sarah go. Wow, it must be hard on him. PLEASE UPDATE MORE!!! :D

awesome update! and i'm absolutely in love with the banner, btw :)

Aww! I hope Sophie will get Nick to open up more. Thanks for updating. Please update again soon.