wow, just wow. I'm not going to lie and say that I totally understand this story, but it interests me greatly. Maybe I should feel bad for saying that, just because of the actions that have already happened, and I guess I do - kinda, but meh.
I loved how the first chapter was written; it has very good detail, and the end really makes you wonder. Also, I think it's fascinating - in a way - that y'all are writing about this kind of thing. I mean, most people wouldn't, ya know?
Mkay enough with the trying to be all nice and make a semi-long comment, just wanna say that was a really good beginning, and can't wait for the next chapter!
wow... WTFMusicPerson you did an amazing job bringing the first chapter up. You put in so many details and I loved the way you wrote. I was feeling nervuse for her the whole time and I can not wait for the next person. You did an excellent job making me want more. Amazing. :)