The Stars Don't Shine - Comments

I wish you would update this, it's a really great story :)

I wish you would update, this is a really great story :)

Love it so far :D

I love love love this.

I'm loving this at the moment
Can't wait for more :)

Micah* heehe

“Coolio,” I grinned, spinning on the heels of my Keds, walking over to my lab station

:3 hahahahahhajajahahajahnahahahhahaha

Coolio. You made my day like 10x better hahahahaj. So i like the layout, love the chapter. What a douchebag. He needs to get his head out of his own ass. I like micaj, she seems coolio hahahahha oh man.

Thats a keeper c:

Hey, very nice start to this. I like it. (:

i'll be micah's best girl friend!

this chapter was really good. i like your writing a lot! i think she will agree to tutor oli in the end. he'll probably try and feel her up or something, haha.
also, amanda and oli broke up :o

Oli is such an asswipe! I can't wait for Micah to put him in his place! and tbh, I think she's gonna follow through with not being Oli's tutor...or at least I hope she does!
Update soon<333333

Ohhh mann, this is good. Cowrite? :0 i really would but my writing sucks, and comparing to yours eery other chapter is baddd. Thennitll make it look like rubbish, subbed. Cant wait for moree <3 :3

this sounds really good! your writing is great. im hooked now c:
i can't wait to find out why oli ruined their friendship.
update again soon!

Wow. I got hooked on just the chapter title xDD
Can't wait to read more. Update soon!
BTW, really nice layout

Okay, so this is something completely different from anything I've ever read. Usually the girl is perfect, with maybe one or two flaws, but it's obvious that this girl has problems with her self-esteem (maybe, I can't tell yet) and that she has enemies.
But I'm really confused at why Oliver would just suddenly start insulting her out of nowhere. I'm thinking it has SOMETHING to do with what's her face, oh, bitch. Yeah. Her.
I really like this and I cannot WAIT to see where you're going with this. I would co-write, but I don't know if I'd be any good or not! Lol. We'll just see what happens.

But - yeah - you should make my story layouts for me! :)

Comment virginity! Hahah :)
But anyway. This is interesting. I can't wait to see where you go with it. :)