Fortuitous - Comments

BlackParadeEndlessly (100)

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WOW.. Please continue writing this, SOON! I love it already! Your style of writing just hooks you in, you have talent!

-- Bliss

June 26th, 2011 at 10:18am

Future_Reflections (100)

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It looks purdy good so far. I subscribed and I like the idea of a change expierience in highschool. This should be worth a read.

June 28th, 2010 at 07:58pm

Kawaii Emotions; (100)

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I agree. I'm very curious to as what this story will be llike.

June 19th, 2010 at 11:11am

Jaslin.Inez (100)

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This was short and sweet. Just enough to pull the reader in. I loved the description in the end. The tense feeling of school being over with, fresh air, and the overall happiness. I'm sure everyone can relate to that.
And Lucy, errr I'm keeping my eye on her. She seems like one of those bad girls that's going to get the MC caught up in some kind of drama or whatnot. I can't wait to see where this goes. I'm subscribing

He took his sweet, ol’ time choosing whether he wanted potatoes or corn

^. Omg I know what you mean. Damn, some people really need to work on that problem.

June 19th, 2010 at 10:51am