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  • April Showers

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    I love this story, and I cannot wait for the shit to hit the fan! Updateupdateupdate!!!!! :D
    August 17th, 2010 at 05:07am
  • Reckless

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    I like this story. A lot :) Write moreeee!
    July 27th, 2010 at 11:47pm
  • Wielding The Stars

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    I love this story. I like how it's told from Jaques' point of view; I like the way she thinks.

    There's only two small problems I see with this story: the grammar could be better, and it's not long enough! I would love to read more in a chapter. :)

    Overall, I'm a fan.
    July 2nd, 2010 at 04:07pm
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