Hollywood Harlot - Comments

I like it! So far it is good.

Okay, what I don't like about your story is that there is too much dialogue, and not enough description. And please, PLEASE, put more space between paragraphs. Mibba doesn't recognize the 'Tab' button, so paragraphs kind of run together if your not careful.

Im subscribing:)

:) Interesting;
But I reccomend changing the font color. =/ Much too bright. It hurt my eyeeees.
I like Celeste's character, due to all the innocent barbies we have starring in so many stories, lately. She appeals to me.

I like the style, and your characters are already forming into interesting parts of the story! By the way, Inez is my friend's middle name, it's the name Agnes in Spanish.

This is a really good story, as everyone else has said.
As everyone else also said, I want to see where this goes!
I am subscribing, and keep up the good work.

The layout was the only turn off for me. That and the sentence structure. But other than that, this was amazing!

Ooooh!! I'm interested to see where this goes!!! I love it. =DD. keep going?

This is really good :)

I love your descriptions and I'm interested to see where this goes. :)

Pretty nice. "__)

I like this so far. I really want to see what comes from it.

This story has really good potential! You seem to be really good at descriptions and fitting dialogue where it's appropriate... it's good! :D

Good summary. I like how real this is. Its good. the real life of a famous girl in the modern age. :)

Great job. :)

I LOVE this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Write more PALEASE!!!

I like it.
The descriptions seem to be really good and it seems like it's got the potential to go somewhere.
Overall it was really well written but I kinda thought it might be moving a tad too fast. Although that might just be me

I like it. Pretty good so far

Hmmm, this seems interesting and it seems like it is going to head somewhere and has potential.
I like it. :D
It is pretty good and I like your descriptions.