It ended with tears. - Comments

Damn! This story really puts an image in your head. I really winced when you talked about the knife going into her skin. It's well written and I especially like the darkness that it has, very interested in finding out what happens, and hope to read more soon.

The only thing I didn't like was that this isn't a full origional story!. It's depressing but well written. It's sad but it makes the reader feel the emotion of the characters and the story. I'd really like to see you write more into this, I'd be interested in reading more. I friggan loved it =)

That was quite a story you wrote. Depressing but I did feel the love between the two at the end. Me being a very emotional person, I kind of felt my throat tightening at the end. If it went on longer, I'm sure you coul have done a LOT more damage.

Good punch girl, I liked it a lot. (:

Wow. That's good. Short but had so much in it. Wowzers

Aww it made me want to cry. I adsolutely loved it! I felt like I was there. :]

aww kinda sad. but loved it.