Manslaughter. - Comments

Wow, this was amazing. Sad yes, but amazing.
You explained everything in great detail, and I loved how the flashbacks
were intertwined into everything.
Good Work :)

Wow.

I got chills from reading your story.

Ten thumbs up. (Yes. I have ten. XD)
And a standing ovation.

Whoa, this literally is giving me goosebumps and shivers right now.
Not many stories can do that :) This was very powerful.

I am sitting here speechless. I absolutely liked this. I adored every bit of this! (:

That was... Great.
Sad, but so amazingly great. :)

Oh.
I think...I think I might cry.
That was so sad.
My youngest sister's name is Libby...
Beautiful job.

This is amazing.
It made me want to cry.
very well done.

The writing itself was wonderful, but I had to use the default layout to be able to read it. x__x;

Wow, that was brilliant.
Yet, so sad.
Great job.

It was a brilliant story!
The beginning is just so thought provoking, sorrowful and heart-wrenching. Just amazing!

I love the beginning and ending paragraphs; very powerful.
That was well-written and a very emotional piece.

The only part that I disagreed with was the officer's lack of emotion. It just seemed unrealistic to me, as the police is generally rather passionate about things like that.

Overall, I really enjoyed it.

awww the banner is cute! but the story was sad D:
It was great, the emotion and feeling was epic :)

Oh my god, that seems so amazingly sad.
But so true, stuff like that actually does happen.
Wow, I loved that. The most favourite paragraph was the last, it held so much in.
Your a great writer.

sent me crazy chills. that was really amazing :D

Dude freaking loved this.

The last paragraph I think was my favorite. It said so much. You did great

:}

This story is awesome

This was so sad, but amazingly well-written. I loved the detail and imagery.
The plot was simple but so well played out. I liked that it was broken up with
Flash backs that made the story pull together quite perfectly at the end.
I also loved that the first and last paragraphs mimicked each other, with only slight adjustments.
This was a very haunting story.

Oh wow. That's crazy. Poor Libby. Damn good. I enjoyed it very much.

This chilled me to my very core. This was well written and bone-chilling. I love it. <3

This was insane!!

Amazing one-shot, I have to say.