One in a Million. - Comments

So I just stumbled across this, and decided to check it out... I really love what you have of it so far. :)
It's been... several years since you've updated this, but I have faith you could come back to it. I've seen the student/teacher idea done before, but never quite like this. I would be interested in reading more if you ever choose to continue it. Like, what all goes down, and how everything ends. Will they continue with their "perfect" lives, or will it conclude with them realizing they're not so perfect after all?
There was just one confusing factor I found as I was reading, and that's the timeline between chapter 4 and 5. It starts out as a Tuesday, but then as you started chapter 5, it moves to Wednesday... but the event it included was what I assumed to be after school on the Tuesday, because that's what was said in chapter 4. And then in 6, it just moves to Thursday, so maybe you changed your mind on when Willow and her friend went to the clinic, and just never changed it on where you state the date or like within the chapter content? Idk, but that was my only thing with confusion. Otherwise, the rest of this story is golden and greatly written. :)
Again, even though it's been a while, I really hope you consider coming back to this someday. It deserves an ending, and I feel like this could be an amazing story in full; it's hard to fully judge just yet since it only had a few chapters. But yeah, I just wanted to leave feedback letting you know that you would still have a reader if you ever continued. People like me are still stumbling across it.
You're an awesome writer, and even if you don't continue, I hope you're at least still writing on your own time. :)
<3

Can you please start to update this story again i love it and i have been waiting for about a year for you to update it do please do so. I will love you foreverrrrr and i will read and subscribe and recommend all your stories please and thank you.

*subscribed*

Heyy, LOVED the update! Things between Willow and Alex are getting intense. Not like they already were. <Stating The Odvious> Update more? SOON! plz?

LUV YA!

So Amazing. :) Update? I love this story!

Wow, I really like this. It's really really original.
Not gonna lie, I kinda like your Mr. Gaskarth better than mine. He's actually trying to follow the rules, mine obviously broke too many to count. xD
I hope you update this sometime in the near future. It's really good and has a lot of potential :)

Way to go Ash, getting an interview with Lisa! I bet your just 'hopping out of your skinny jeans' happy.

I luv the story cuz, don't forget to keep writting it. :)

wow Willow so pretty! and Drew is hot :]
and hmm Alexas a teacher, its going to be weird to imagaine! haha
I'm sorry but this seriously bothers me:
it isnt centered, its to the right, im sorry it just botheres me xD
but the layout is fantastic! iwish i could make them that good!
wow, not good, you can tell Alex and Willow are going to get together :/
chapter 1:
Yeah i guess thats a little weird, getting married senior year
I like how your introducing her character before getting Alex in it
That's a good idea, go character development! haha :]
Wow, no sex before they got married, good for them
aww before Nathaniel being in love with Willow xD
It's cute how Drew is jealous of someone like that :]
aww he still gets her roses, even after shes married haha
oh cliffhanger at the end, i wonder how this is al gonna unfold :/
I also wanna know what nathaniel looks like! haha
chapter 2:
Poor Alex, already late on the first day
they didn't change her name on the records? well i guess that makes sense though
xD his first rule involves cussing, good old Gaskarth :]
haha and he texts lisa, right after he gave the assignment haha
haha "no you can just throw them in there"
but now i have a pretty good idea how will and alex are going to get closer
she stays after school to help him, this is going to get good :]
xD her name is willow cuz her mom had her under a tree, wow xD thats funny
haha the students are STD banks, i deffenity like that
wow im surprised alex didnt get all the hints, she IS married haha
chapter 3:
aww the dogs are so cute :D <3
Drew and Willow are a pretty couple i think :]
aww she cooked for him, lisa is sweet :]
Lisa and Alex make a good couple too!
All of them seem so happy with each other,
I'm curious to see more about willow and alex though
chapter 5:
I love her outfit! its cute! and the note he left was cute too :]
rumors are terrible, they just assume stuff :/
haha Jen has a crush on alex, but who wouldnt?
oh gosh of course gaskarth checking her out xD
and he got a boner! haha thats funny. such a sex addict haha but hes amazing
im kinda scared that willow might be pregnant. i dont know :/
jeez he was kinda harsh on her, i get it, but he didnt need to be that mean
chapter 6:
I read your authors note, did you ahve an interview,
with the REAL lisa ruocco?
well at least willow will tell drew right away, thats good
xD i like how she describe jen flirting with alex haha
I reall ylike this story! its a really good idea!
You're seriously an amazng writer, and i love reading your work!
I bet your going to become a writer someday, a famous one.
keep up the good work! ;D

FINALLY!!! Damn girl, do you have any idea how long I have been waiting for an update on this. Please, please, please bring Alex, pardon me, I mean Mr. Gaskarth into this soon. I love the tension between the two of them.

I really love this story. I've been looking for something like it for a while; I've only just gotten into reading ATL fics and I've really started to like them! Your story has a really great storyline; it takes a twist on something sort of cliche and is much more mature than most of its type. The only problem I have is that occassionally you use too many commas, but otherwise your writing is flawless. Just try sounding out your story, and remember that each time you put a comma you have to pause, and see if it flows properly.

If you need help with ideas I'd be happy to help. Feel free to message me; I know how it can be at times to keep the ideas flowing, and anything to keep you writing I'd be happy to do!

Keep up the great work, hon, you're a great writer! I'm looking forward to reading more, and of course, let me know if you need help :D

L O V E it.
Uhmazing.
Update for me ;D

You have no idea how desperately I want you to update. I've already read this story about 5 times!

Please please please update soon! I can't wait to know what's gonna happen next! :) :)

MORE MORE MORE! This is fantastic. Please keep on writing!

I loved this update! :]
And Willow's outfit.
I hope Alex and her have a juicy convo soon ;]
Lol.
Update soon <3

This is so cute! I'm not a huge fanfic reader at all, but this definitely caught my interest. Absolutely lovely. I'm gonna sub (: <3

Holy shiznit!
So much linkage but you already told me that!
Ashasaur! The latest chapter was fucking epic!
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By the way, thanks for the shout outs (=
And people, sign the petition!

Love this story :)

I like her friends.
Ooh, I can't wait for the clinic.
And he's being so mean!

I'm not gonna lie, the girl who plays Willow is gorgeous. Who is she?

Great story! :D Love it :)