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  • Spencer Smith.

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    amazing chapter like always <3
    July 27th, 2010 at 10:42am
  • XoNeSeCrEtX

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    ohhh meehhhh goosshhh yayyy!!!!i get a hug and a cookie :D update sooon pllleeaasseee
    July 27th, 2010 at 06:23am
  • Togepenis

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    What a creeper!
    July 27th, 2010 at 04:34am
  • hachie

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    Wow he really is a manipulator, isn't he?
    XP I am already hating Manny for getting close to Cole!!!! It should be Christanna!!!!!!
    So Chris goes to the same high school as Manny, wow Cole is a genius to use Manny to get Chris back.
    He already has plan when he does encounter her, especially when she is alone.
    Hey when is it going to go to Chris POV, I really would love to read her thoughts how her life is going so far.
    Hey that Svetlana, is it the same one that was going out with Jackson? I hope not.
    Cole is already stirring up trouble isn't he.
    And who is this ex-boyfriend of Manny's?
    Well I look forward to the next update. Update sooner!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    SO have you figured out how to put the banner up yet?
    UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 27th, 2010 at 03:36am
  • Lukas

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    i cant wait for the next one!!!!
    July 24th, 2010 at 08:05am
  • xxxchicaxxx

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    MOAR!!!!!! Pwease!?!
    I lurvs this story! (:
    July 19th, 2010 at 12:57am
  • Novia195597

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    MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
    M O R E
    TEAMMMMM COLLLEEEE ALL THE WAY ^^
    July 16th, 2010 at 05:46am
  • JesusOfSuburbia

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    Love the chapter! :) Haha, I had never really thought about Cole's looks in GSL, but now I can't help but picture him as a sex god. x)
    Anyway, I love love love the chapter. Can't wait for the next one! Update soon.

    Oh and I'm going to summer camp in five days for a whole month, so I'll probably have to catch up a lot when I come back. -__- Ohwell, it's worth it. :D
    July 14th, 2010 at 12:13am
  • Kimm

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    ugh no. Don't but characters in. Good stories with great descriptions such as this ones should already paint a very vivid mental image.
    July 12th, 2010 at 08:58pm
  • Peaceandlove13

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    I love the story its amazzing! You should put the characters in! So people can know what Cole and Shane and Manny and everyone looks like :) It would be cool. If you want I could help picking out people. Just message me :)
    July 11th, 2010 at 11:11pm
  • I'm.Not.Insane.

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    Dun dun dunnn...
    Great Update!
    July 11th, 2010 at 08:15pm
  • coralreefs;

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    hahaha, i love your author's notes just as much as I love your stories. you're hilarious. anyways, can't wait for chapter three! awesome update by the way. (:
    keep it up.

    -Cadence.
    July 11th, 2010 at 10:08am
  • Spencer Smith.

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    i'm already in love with this!
    you're writing is amazing.
    July 11th, 2010 at 07:41am
  • forbbidenfruite

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    *I can't decide who I feel worse for. Manny or Christina? Manny is being used and christian is the one who is being targeted by a physco elder brother. Decisons decisons.
    July 11th, 2010 at 05:39am
  • hachie

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    OMG I feel so jealous and hate Manny because she has become infatuated with Cole right away!!!!!!
    So now Cole is planning his evil scheme on getting Chris back.
    I feel no remorse for what will come to Manny.
    Oh question: who do you think portrays Chris, Cole, Manny, her mom, Shawn and Terrence?
    I really want to make a banner for you!!!!!!!
    LOVE THE CHAPTER AND DEFIANTLY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE TO BE OUT!!!!!!!
    You have made my day~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Thank you for the hug! XD
    UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!
    July 11th, 2010 at 03:26am
  • XoNeSeCrEtX

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    ohh mehh gosh can i have the hug AND the cookie? jk an I wuvvveeedd this chapter yew have to write moarrr
    July 11th, 2010 at 03:01am
  • Spencer Smith.

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    can't wait to get the next chapter <333
    July 10th, 2010 at 07:00am
  • angeli.sei

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    Oh, me likey.
    I can't wait for more.
    I'm so excited!!!!!
    July 9th, 2010 at 09:29pm
  • izzylizzy95

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    Definetely keep writing
    July 8th, 2010 at 11:42pm
  • coralreefs;

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    of course you should continue! i love it already. just wondering, will Christianna be in this one too? (:
    -good luck
    July 7th, 2010 at 08:26pm