Semper Amare - Comments

I love this song! You portrayed it perfectly.
The actions in this just totally screamed whatever this song is...I totally blanked on the title...
wow. /facepalm.

I am absolutely astounded by this. I like how you translated the lyric into a story. It's very sweet and I love it.

Winner's posted now.

-kayt

This was absolutely beautiful. The writing, the story, the characters, everything was beautiful.
I've never heard the song that you used, but it flowed very, very well.
The entire first paragraph pulled me in immediately. Your writing described how they fit together so well.
Their relationship was portrayed so perfectly, I felt like I had been reading about them for chapters instead of just one oneshot.
I love, love LOVE your descriptive writing. Your entire writing style, actually. You're so extremely talented. This was brilliant.

That...That was just simply beautiful. I loved it, although dark stuff is more my speed.
I think the description said this was a songfic? If so, I think you followed the song well. And if it wasn't lyrics, then you created great dialogue.
Everything flowed pretty smoothly, and it kinda had an old timey feel to me, but maybe I'm just crazy.
Anyway, great job!