Absence of the Heart - Comments

is elisabeth their daughter or jesse's mother?

i dont even know what to say. honestly.it was sweet and cute and i wanted to cry. and i can promise you ill read it a hundred times cause its so cute and brilliant and i love it and just AGHHHH!!!

Aww I love this!

That was super cute. I love Jonathon & Jesse (Yes, Jonathon Groff is definitely a cutie.) & I like this piece.
It was really sweet, and absolutely heartbreaking when she left him.
But I'm glad she came back.
This was good.

This is amazing!
Your writing is fantastic and I can't wait to read more of your work! :D

XD I love this. I really love spin-offs from other pieces of work.
They're so entertaining to read.
And this makes me realize how much more of your writing I'm going to stalk.
Seriously, that first bit was hawt. XD

that was amazing,
first i got really scared after she left him
and i was like oh no this is gonna be sad
and i shed a tear and then when they got back together
and the end it was amazinggggg