Forbidden Love - Comments

The story nice and I liked the direction that you were trying to go with it. It just felt a bit rushed, I never really got time to know the characters or why they even liked each other. Maybe more length to it might help.

Lol. Okay, probably a bad joke, but in "Confrontation", he said "Tyler! I'm in the closet!"
Funny

Lol. Okay, probably a bad joke, but in "Confrontation", he said "Tyler! I'm in the closet!"
Funny

Oh my sweet crap! We must have the same mind!
I wrote a gay romance as well(different plot), but the main couple shared their first kiss in a secluded spot near a cliff!
I am tripping on something. Wow. Crazy

Read the first chapter and it's cool.
God said "Being single is not a punishment..."
I'd be like "Uh, YES IT IS! WTF GOD?!"
But, I'll keep reading. Gay romances are always interesting(not always but you know what I mean)

Love the story kid,I'll get round to editing it and sending it back to ya later. ~TB

The ending was beautiful =) I hope there's a sequel that would be amazing ^_^

This sotyr is so good. one of my friends suggested it to me and i read it. Is there going to be a squel because the way you ended it made it sound like there is gonna be one

Sadness. You ended it

awesome story one of the best ever written in my opinion!!!!

aaawww, so glad that u update this i really needed somehing to read, and boom, there are 2 chapters but they are so very nice 2 chapters

i like it :D

awesomenew chapter, lol, it's so crazy, u are making me nervous

love it !!!! im lesbian but have gay friends but this is like amazing and i seriously love gay guys!!!!!!!!

Adorable and for someone who hasn't had a kiss the scene is just fine, I wouldn't have guessed that you hadn't. I have to say, I haven't finished it yet so there may be a comment later again from me, I'm a slow reader and didn't want to not comment lol. Honestly, describing a kiss in general isn't an easy thing because most people just do it and go blank on exactly what is going on. Or maybe it's just me.. Any who, Love it so far <3

I don't know if you have, but Rainbow Boys and the God Box are really good books you might want to read. Those two are my favorite Gay books (RB is a series) Which seem to have a similar feel to the way yours is written.

i would have to agree with everyone, it's now one of my favorite's so much better then some of the real books on paper back that i read >.> they aren't this nerve reacking to find out whats next and so much little drama, and that lil sis, is funny, i love i can't wait for more ^.^

I am still completely loving this story! It is just so filled with emotion ^_^ and it is written fantasticly =D

I like it but um... plz tell me kids dont read this man. The last chapter was way to descriptive.... And i read it only because Jenn told me too. I GET 5 DOLLARS YAY!!! Good story man.

Kyle, this is incredible! Very Well written!!

Awww thanks ^^