The More I Think, The Deeper I Sink - Comments

Nice update. I was fearing that you had abandoned this story. Please continue, I am enjoying this story very much. It has a lot of potential, and your writing skills are amazing!

the story is really well written.
the only thing i noticed were the lyrics to of all the gin joints in all the world.
sorry.

More! I demand!!!! *subscribes*

:D Thank you for the support and I'm thrilled that you enjoy it. Comments like these keep me going. Thanks again!

I quite like it so far, I love the way you describe things so well, it really helps the mind put the details in =D
I can't help but feel there is something poetic in there too.

Keep it up!
*Subscribes*

~Ruthus
xoxox