Nothing and Everything - Comments

Thanks, this was co-written but I'll thank you on behalf of Deceptive Cadence as well. We started this story off enthusiastically, but as we sort of grew and continued school it veered off haha. But thank you for the comment. I don't come to this site much anymore and it was really great to have a compliment when I did log in :)

I've fallen in love with this story.
As the person before me wrote, I also hope that you find the inspiration to finish this story.
:]

Hurrah for very possibly the best fanfic ever! I really hope you can find the inspiration again to finish this story someday. It would be a shame to leave it hanging forever.

Taste The Courage:

cafe scenes are extremely hard, hahaha.

:lol:

im excited...!

were trying!!
cafe scenes are extremely hard, hahaha.
hannah we must dooo it. i think i have an idea for the introduction paragraph!

Deceptive Cadence:

We're working on it =)

you need to work faster
:D

haha. indeed.
want to raver this weekend?

We're working on it =)

I need chapter 11 as soon as possible! :D

I'm guessing Conor Oberst is known? I don't know...I'm so out of touch with this new generation music, I have no clue who's famous and who's not. I'm guessing the end of the prologue was the attack of 9/11 since it's 2001. Right?

I'm not a huge fan of fanfictions of any kind. It takes a lot to get me into them. I didn't really feel the plot starting out in the first chapter. I didn't even know what it was since the summary didn't give me much - just parirings and cameos. So, the whole first two chapters confused me a bit.

So, I re-read the first two chapters. I wanted to give it another chance to see if I could pick out things. Slower this time and they actually made sense to me. I guess this story isn't meant to be read fast like others.

Con crit wise, I don't know. It may just be because I'm not a fan of fanfiction, but I really can't give any. I didn't see anything that really stood out. You did a good job at writing it, it's just not my type of story.

I really like this.(:
Not a pairing I've ever read before.
It's interesting.
More soon?

KEEP UPDATING

I love this story already!
Hands down, my favorite story on Mibba...
I needed a good Conor story!! :)

and so Janet's OCD bitching begins.... XD
awesome you guys, update again soon!

Wow this is amazing,
the pairing is just fantastic and the way everything is described is perfect.

aw thanks :) im glad you like it. see not all fanfic is crap.

i'm pretend that it's not fanfic and reading it. it's really good. it would be BETTER if it wasn't fanfic, but i like it LOTS AND LOTS!!!! *subscribes*

SPAZZ!!!!!! oh my god!! you guys are awesome, you have no idea how happy it makes me that it opens up with connor singing The Calendar Hung Itself!!!! that's my favorite Bright Eyes song!!!! You guys work great together! keep it up!

"Nothing and Everything: A Doubtful Sound"

This was too much. Conor managed another phrase before his breath gave out, his voice breaking. His head fell into his hands. A drawn-out sob. Silence. The engineer threw up his hands, muttering under his breath.

^I loved that line the most through this story. Also, the way you started the introduction of the story was great and it got my attention very well.

You could feel everything that was happening and when Conor wanted to step out and get some air I felt like I was actually in New York and I love stories dealing with cities. The descriptions was what done it for me from the beginning to end I saw everything and like I said before I felt everything.

But you need to space out your dialog when a new person talks okay.

He tuned out the sounds of the city, concentrating on his own breath. In, out, shuddering, living.

^Fucking beautiful. Something so simple can mean so much. Everything was in perfect detail and gosh it was good.

"An Uncertain Beat."
I noticed the dates in the beginning. Are you going back in time or something?
Then when I read I got my answer it's like a flashback or something. But anyway's you kind of see where conor was coming from in this chapter with him wanted to be a singer and all and I thought it was good stuff :)

Nice ending also.

I really like this story. It's really captavating, and makes me want to know what happens next. Really enjoyable so far, and am looking forward to more.