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  • Vulnerable.

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    As other people said, I can see how this can turn cliche. But this is beautifully written, I can really sense the emotion in the characters (:
    July 20th, 2010 at 09:43pm
  • Jaslin.Inez

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    I can see how this can turn really cliched. Don't go there, please don't

    Other than that, this was good. You pay nice attention to detail. It makes reading the story more interesting. I loved
    July 9th, 2010 at 12:48am
  • Kawaii Emotions;

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    I understand she wouldn't want anyone talking about her dead friend. But she was a whore, right? so why get angry.
    July 1st, 2010 at 08:13am
  • stencil heart.

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    I just started this, and I'm already loving it. But try not to get too cliche, yes?
    I'm definitely going to keep reading. :)
    July 1st, 2010 at 05:06am
  • Unpretty

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    I like this one.
    July 1st, 2010 at 04:58am
  • alexander bernadotte

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    I really like this (: The ideas for your stories are wonderful! <3
    July 1st, 2010 at 04:42am
  • jet star.

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    This story inspires me to be honest
    July 1st, 2010 at 03:09am
  • paranoid android.

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    Ooh, nice ending.
    Your writing is pretty good, and the ideas for them are inspired, which makes them a whole lot better XD
    June 29th, 2010 at 10:49pm
  • Kawaii Emotions;

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    I really like this. Just don't make the charcter a cliched girl with a bunch of problems that thinks she's ugly when she's really not. Another than that I loved it & I'm subscribing.
    June 25th, 2010 at 06:55am
  • LeleDisco

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    I like this.
    June 24th, 2010 at 06:53am
  • jet star.

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    I'm totally diggin' this!
    I can't wait for more :D
    June 21st, 2010 at 05:00am
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