The Fountain - Comments

I loved this. All the emotions are so beautifully portrayed, you can't help but sympathize with the cellist and her feelings of inadequacy and sliding downward. And I really liked the description of the fountain as well.

(Yeah, I'm like really slowly reading all your stuff...)

You must have such a vivid visual on everything. This is amazing. Do you know alot about music, and uh...orchestra styled instruments? lol. I'd never be able to write about them, or anything to do with this. Lovely work.

Beautiful once again, cadence. I love your descriptions about as much as I love pie. Which is saying a lot. Because I really love pie. XP

Not much else to say, really. Just one spot. You said "lightening," which is the process of something getting paler in shade or tone. You probably meant "lightning," like during storms.

I am in love with this.
I feel like I am the cellist, and I can feel everything she can feel.
It's beaufitul.