My Light in the Dark - Comments

I thought this was really beautiful and I could imagine everything so clearly. I loved this line the most, I think.

For a short amount of time I just sat there taking everything in, the serenity of what was in front of me. This was the last time that I was gonna be here and now this place seemed more magical then it ever had before.- I'm not sure what it was, but yeah, it was love.

I loved this (:
The ending made me a little sad. But hey! You can't alawys have a fairytale ending.
Great job!

I really liked this. Cancer has affected me personally so many different times, and this kind of gave it a happier connotation for me, if that makes sense. The description and the imagery were lovely. Wonderful job. :)

Thank You =DD
I didn't even notice that mistake when I re-read it... need to go fix that now hahaha

I only found one mistake that I would like to point out to you.

so there won't be any people there like usually
Usually should be usual

This truly was magnificent. The way you wrote this, it seemed to paint a picture in my mind. I really enjoyed reading it!

Thank you,like a bitter sweat ending. To me they still feel sad. Haha

wow this is amazing, The ending seemed happy to me in a weird way, kinda of like the ending of The Notebook.
Sad/Happy, it was a really sweet ending, she was happy