Curls. - Comments

  • haley3009

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    <3 Love it and it was so cute.
    October 5th, 2010 at 12:44am
  • purple haze.

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    Awww cute, one problem though
    WHY WASN'T I TOLD THIS WAS UP?!
    Other than this, kudos!
    July 3rd, 2010 at 11:58am
  • richard roman.

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    I absolutely adored this and the way you have with your words.
    I especially enjoy how it begins and ends with his curls.
    Like, the whole story was centered around them. It's unique.
    July 2nd, 2010 at 09:15pm
  • craic queen

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    Oooh, I really liked it. :D

    The detail was really good and I got some really good pictures in my head.
    tehe Plus, it's Greg's curls. And Greg/Nick. ;)
    And though the ending was a bit corny, I really loved it.
    I'm a sucker for those kinds of endings.
    But...it was a really good read and it made me smile as I read it.

    Good job ALi. Arms :D
    June 21st, 2010 at 04:38pm
  • inactivee

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    Eee, I like it ;D

    It's not bad at all Arms

    The great thing at the moment is it could stay as a oneshot, or it could be developed further, there's the option. It was well described, I got a good image in my head, and the ending may have been a little cheesy, but it worked :) Arms xxx
    June 20th, 2010 at 11:03pm