I absolutely adored this and the way you have with your words. I especially enjoy how it begins and ends with his curls. Like, the whole story was centered around them. It's unique.
The detail was really good and I got some really good pictures in my head. Plus, it's Greg's curls. And Greg/Nick. ;) And though the ending was a bit corny, I really loved it. I'm a sucker for those kinds of endings. But...it was a really good read and it made me smile as I read it.
The great thing at the moment is it could stay as a oneshot, or it could be developed further, there's the option. It was well described, I got a good image in my head, and the ending may have been a little cheesy, but it worked :) xxx