Golden - Comments

Tara, I can't put into words how beautiful this was. There was conversation without dialogue, and I love that. It's hard to pull off effectively, and you've done it exceedingly well. Plus, I felt the warmth, the sadness, the jubilance from them both. All that in just a few words. And, really, all I could think afterwards was: Incredible.

Like the saying goes, good things come in small packages.

I don't think there could be a single word added or removed to make this drabble better.

It's a great piece of writing, completely.